Notes on 'Travelling'

Second paragraph has a few chunky sentences that might benefit from rephrasing, but overall I'm pleased with this chapter as it starts to suggest reasons for Calysia's self-absorbed temprement.

I'm also pondering if the line "the inn was too crowded with the barman and Wrathwrought inside" makes it clear that Calysia's narative is often misleading. "The inn was too crowded" probably puts the mental image of a bustling place into readers' minds, yet the second half of the sentence hints that it's actually quite empty and this is just another one of her barbs at her companion. I hope so, anyway, as I really want to make that clear. Calysia infers way too much and should not be trusted. >.>